wallenstein2333 发表于 2024-5-11 08:31   全显示 1楼
辰辰果然是阿龟的白月光，自始至终阿龟对辰辰都抱有善意，感情也顺其自然的发展，虽然最后确定关系还是靠俗套的坏人春药（这点不够完美有新意hhh），但感情发展很到位了。最后辰辰的离开也让故事更加真实。每个人都不是另一个人的附庸，每个人都有自己的生活。在刘备文里能体现这一点，那境界和可看性都会大大提高。感谢大大，希望大大写出更优秀的作品
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