2074599234 发表于 2022-3-20 23:04   全显示 1楼
这篇《食戟之银》不知为何读上去有些日式轻小说的味道，大段描写都是通过对话来进行的。若是一般小说这样写无可厚非，但是情色小说通过这种方式很难让读者在阅读时产生爽感（特别是在描写肉戏的片段上有食之无味弃之可惜的鸡肋感），反而像在读一篇正经的《食戟之灵》同人小说。期待作者在这方面有所变化吧。
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