黎明权杖 发表于 2022-11-15 00:54   全显示 1楼
感觉上环的桥段有点草率，没怎么描写一下子就进入到后面3p的环节，我觉得上环这个过程本身就是极有仪式感的部分，可以写的更细一点
然后这篇的调教部分主要偏心理调教，没怎么见到一些特别新奇的肉体调教桥段，有趣的玩法和道具
虽然已经有后续了，不过写到这儿的时候还没看后续，希望后面能有更多有意思的玩法
里面那个心理调教法还是相当绝的，先剥离出原本的生活再给塞回去，本可以忍受黑暗只要未曾见过光明...
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  • soyoui 金币 +10 认真回复，奖励！ 2022-11-15 04:29
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