little_boss_sex 发表于 2016-8-28 21:49   全显示 1楼
看了第二章感觉清河兄很有可能也是派出所系统里做的吧，很喜欢清河兄的这种文风，很有生活感，容易让读者读后代入自己的生活
顺便也提点意见，王彩虹与老成、成强搭上的过程感觉太简单了些，前面都没什么铺垫，开始的过程太直白了点
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