大东山大王 发表于 2022-3-18 20:49   全显示 1楼
谢谢大大的辛苦付出.文笔斐然.有剧情描写有心理描写还是很好看的.
剧情的话还是希望和男主有关系的不要绿了吧.配角绿之类的那倒无所谓.
后续下话希望大大可以多安排几条故事线.女主不必要太多.合适就好了.每个女主可以多安排几个剧情.这样子有高潮有结尾有逻辑
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