xiexieni 发表于 2014-8-19 06:03   全显示 1楼
以你这等微没（末）功夫。
故事诚然是好故事，但小弟愚见：花少爷已塑造成看客、绿龟，在读者心目中有些苍白，空洞，况且胯下之物不如别人，现在若要重新塑造，弄不好写失败了，感觉没必要。
个见而已，不管楼主的故事如何发展，这书还是好看的，我也愿意看下去。
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